A few questions, 1 are the black lines necessary? and if they are necessary are they necessarily to be larger than the actual picture plane (when combined?) If So, could you at least make it some how engaging to create a tension? Add some contrast silhouettey pattern in there? Also, since you signed the image, is the watermark necessary? Basically you added two watermarks. do you sell that much work that you're that paranoid someone is going to steal your work? Sorry, its hard for me to look at and enjoy the image when you've got so much "stuff" on the picture plane, unrelated to the picture, to distract me.
Well now isn't she a lovely one. Even with the little we see of her tells us quite a bit. Her eyes are beautiful, and that hair piece is amazing. Really a shame we don't get to see the rest of her. This is really a great piece.